I first went to
this place about 3 years ago and I try to stop every time we go out of town. I
enjoy the fresh air and the sound of the water that's runs through here. When I
go I love to hike up higher to see the whole waterfall from the middle of it. I
enjoy taking my family to enjoy the scenery, the gift shop, the
restaurant, the smell of the coffee and pastries being made daily. This
waterfall has a path that can be hiked up and along the path is great areas to
take pictures. The waterfall is a great place to visit and almost everybody who
visits this place wants to go back many times.
I commented on Leonard and Courtney's blogs.
I commented on Leonard
I'm seeing a lot of tell details, describing the place, but not really showing me. What does the coffee smell like? What about the pastries? What does the waterfall sound like? What is the path to the waterfall like? Be specific. Don't be vague.
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